Fiction Park
The spirits inside an abandoned hotel
The three friends got off track as they went deeper into the forests around town. They got lost in a dense jungle, and fun turned into fear.Pratik Mainali
The sunset turned Nainital’s sky orange and pink. Raj and Alok, two Nepali youngsters, played in the hill town’s busy streets amid the beautiful environment. Their old friend Gaurav resided in Nainital, so they visited. After years away, Gaurav was thrilled to see them. After reminiscing about their wonderful moments, the three friends spent the evening exploring Nainital.
They walked beside the peaceful lake, reflecting the gorgeous evening sky. The lads felt time stop as laughter echoed across the lonely night. They got off track as they went deeper into the forests around town. They were lost in a dense jungle, and delight turned to fear. Once-welcoming trees became mazes as fear rose within them like a ghost.
“We must have taken a wrong turn,” said Raj, trying to cover his shaky voice. Gaurav tried to pacify them, “Do not panic. This woodland feels like my hand. We can always return.”
Their surroundings became strange as they walked. It looked like the forest trees were collaborating against them by leaning toward each other. The night’s owl screech, leaf rustle, and distant cry sent chills down their spines. As night fell, time was irrelevant. They walked slowly as if the forest floor would crumble.
Later, they saw an abandoned structure in an open region that gave them chills. Gaurav identified it as the abandoned motel. “We’ll spend the night here because there’s nowhere else to go,” he said. The only sound as they cautiously entered the motel was the floorboards squeaking. The stench of decay and long-lost memories seemed to haunt the air. Raj and Alok looked concerned, but fatigue won.
Gaurav led them up the unsteady stairs to the first floor, where a few rooms were mostly intact. The dusty furniture evoked a bygone era. Gaurav said, “I guess we’ll have to make do with whatever we find.” to appear brave. Boys, remember there are no ghosts. They tried to relax on their makeshift mattresses as the shadows on the walls moved restlessly, like ghosts.
Despite Gaurav’s assurances, they felt apprehensive. Nobody could sleep, and every floorboard squeak or distant sound set their heart racing. As the moon shone through the broken windows, ghostly whispers filled the hotel. Raj’s keen hearing caught up with ghostly laughter and chatter as if the dead were recreating their old lives. Calling, “Alok, did you hear that?” softly speaking, Raj’s voice shook. As Alok nodded, his eyes widened in horror.
“Raj, I hate this place. Certainly, we’re not alone,” he said. A gust of wind opened the door, adding to their fears. The resounding screech chilled them to the bone. Even though Gaurav tried to sound assured, his voice shook, “That’s wind, guys. Try to rest.” However, the evening had further shocks. As they listened to the outside world, they noticed the soft, ghostly padding that gave them chills.
Raj managed to peer through the keyhole, and what he saw stopped his heart. The night-veiled figure stalked the halls silently. Raj murmured, heart thumping, “There’s someone out there.” Gaurav looked through the keyhole next, shocked. “It’s impossible…That's impossible!” he whispered. “Gaurav, what’s wrong?” Alok asked hardly audibly. Gaurav stared at them with a moon-pale face. “The woman I saw resembled my sister in every aspect. But she’s been gone for years!” he said.
As his discovery hit, ghostly laughter erupted. It seemed like the ghost visitors’ echoes filled the silent motel. “Listen, we must leave this location quickly,” Raj said with urgency. Just before they left, the hotel came alive with evil. The air was heavy, and the walls creaked. Alok’s shoulder was pricked by a cold hand. He exclaimed, “We shouldn't have come here,” fighting to escape the unseen hold.
Gaurav’s voice was desperate as he said, “We need to find a way to appease the spirits.” They worked harder to discover the ghosts’ sorrowful tales. Antique photos, letters, and artefacts revealed lost love, treachery, and unmet dreams. Gaurav saw his missing sibling in the girl. Her heartbreaking narrative of a love torn apart by cultural and familial expectations emerged as they pieced together the pieces.
The ghosts became increasingly restless as morning approached. The entire hotel heard their anguish moans. Gaurav, Raj, and Alok had little time to free the spirits. “I think I know what we must do,” Raj said firmly, “We must face the past, share their stories, and give them closure.” They devised a plan to contact the deceased and guarantee them their stories would be remembered. They wrote about their experiences and left them in strategic hotel locations. The motel seemed to feel ghostly around daybreak. The air was gloomy but hopeful. As Gaurav remarked, “We’ve done what we can,” he was exhausted.
They were encircled by comforting light as they left the eerie motel. They felt calm in the once-haunted hotel’s soothing light. The atmosphere changed, and the heavy feeling subsided. Raj, Alok, and Gaurav cautiously entered daylight, hearts racing. They faced the ghosts of the past and gave them peace, but now they could only trust that their sacrifices were enough. They pondered the night’s events as they descended the wobbly steps.
The morning sun cleared shadows, making the woods more inviting. The three people walked quietly, lost in their thoughts. They learned a lot from the terrible history of the abandoned hotel as the result of love frustrated by social and familial norms. The sad ghosts suffered indefinitely until their words were heard. They wrote about lost love and crushed hopes to connect the past and present. Knowing they had freed the souls but also comprehending the amount of suffering that had driven them to haunt was bittersweet.
Nainital’s customary views greeted them as they emerged from the forests. In the dawn light, the lake’s waters reflected the hills’ beauty. Nobody in town knew about the ancient hotel’s uncanny happenings around daybreak. Gaurav glanced at his friends with gratitude and comfort.
While that night would haunt them forever, they realised they had discovered strength in each other after meeting an alien. No one in Nainital knew about the frightening happenings as they returned to Gaurav’s residence. The empty motel symbolised finality and tranquillity after causing panic. Routine ruled the day as if the night before had been a nightmare. It reminded Raj, Alok, and Gaurav of the unfathomable powers beyond human comprehension.
Gaurav broke the silence that night near the lake. “You know, I’m glad we checked out the empty motel.” Alok and Raj were inquisitive about him. “Why is that?” Alok inquired. Gaurav smiled gently. He said, “Because it taught me the value of facing our fears and our history.” Unresolved feelings imprisoned the spirits they had met. “We gave them closure by validating their suffering.” Raj nodded with understanding. He said, “The ones we keep hidden inside us scare us the most. Yet, facing them, talking about them, is the only way to find closure.”
The water mirrored the guys’ thinking stillness. The dead seemed to represent our life’s triumphs and tragedies rather than bad spirits. In subsequent days, Raj, Alok, and Gaurav became buddies. They became bonded after overcoming the huge challenge of their travels. Though serene and beautiful, Nainital’s spooky past was sealed in the abandoned hotel. Even while locals still talked about the haunted building, they no longer felt vindictive.
In reflection, Raj and Alok realised their stay in Nainital was unique. They gained a new understanding of life’s complexities after surviving the dark woods and conquering their fears. They said goodbye to Gaurav with mixed emotions, knowing their terrible incident would haunt them forever. However, they knew they were freeing the ghosts of the dilapidated hotel, leaving a legacy.
The Nainital ghosts taught them about life’s transience, overcoming anxiety, and genuine friendship’s constancy. Raj and Alok watched Nainital recede into the distance, sharing a story of human bravery and kindness. They would miss Gaurav and their short vacation. As the train left, they realised their harrowing excursion was amazing and would eternally unite them.